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                                                              Mistakes

Everybody makes mistakes so nobody’s  perfect.

In fact, if everyone was perfect, why would they need to learn and go to

school? There are a variety of different mistakes, and the most common

ones are mistakes like with writing or spelling. However, there are also

serious mistakes which can cause injury or death.

Lots of mistakes are made on purpose, and people can even go to jail from

this. Everyday, you would hear the sound of police cars! Despite the fact that

you could be sent to jail from this, you could also learn from making serious

mistakes, you could also learn from it at the same time.

You could get a good experience!

It is a fact that Asian children make fewer mistakes than European and

American children. This is because Asian mothers always tell their children

not to make mistakes or else bad things will happen. This is a super

big problem because kids won’t be creative and make something new.

They would always go back to the old things and not make different things

because they are scared to make mistakes.

So this teaches us that everyone makes a mistake but just not on purpose.

It is acceptable to make mistakes but just not over and over again.

中年男子碎碎念：

即將滿11歲的姊姊，應該開始學習撰寫評論式的

文章，而不是持續記錄型態的作文方式。

兩百字上下的短文，對她們較為合適，藉由

三四個段落的排序，比較能夠讓她們體會如何

架構一篇文章？如何起始、陳述與結論！

當然巧妙的運用不同字彙，以及文法的正確性，

也非常重要，不過，後者就不是老爸能力所及的！

希望兩個孩子都能愛看書、愛寫文章，體會如何

透過浩瀚又神奇的文字，表達另一層次目的與

境界！